Final Major Assignment #1

Audience, genre, and purpose are essential key terms for successful writers; they must grasp these basic but essential terms if they want to be successful. The audience is important because a writer must know who their piece is for. Writers must know the proper writing genre since it will set up an expectation for the readers. By knowing the author’s purpose, the readers will easily understand what you are trying to communicate with them and why you are trying to reach them. Seeing why these three terms are crucial to successful authors, I will now analyze three works to see how their authors use these key terms. The three works that we will be looking at are Billy Collins’s Commencement Address at Colorado College, Donovan Livingston’s Spoken Word Commencement Address at Harvard, and Gloria Anzaldua’s “How to Tame a Wild Tongue.”

The genre of Gloria Anzaldua’s “How to Tame a Wild Tongue” is a memoir she depicts her relationship between herself and her language and how her language is her identity and culture. Her work is a memoir because it is a factual story that focuses on a relationship between the writer and person, place, or thing. In How to Tame a Wild Tongue, she focuses on the relationship between her language and identity. She speaks the Chicano language, a “border tongue” the Chicanos created this language to identify themselves as a distinct group of people. They are shamed by both the Spanish and the Americans for speaking their language. In this book, she tries to convince her people not to be ashamed of their language and identity; however, her audience is also people who do not know about the Chicano hardships or do not care about it. “If a person, Chicana or Latina, has a low estimation of my native tongue, she also has a low estimation of me.” (Anzaldua 8). She is telling the audience how connected her language is to her identity. If you mock or hate her language, you also hate her because it is her identity it’s all she has. The purpose of Gloria Anzaldua’s “How to Tame a Wild Tongue” is to educate people about the Chicano’s identity and how they are taught to hate it and be ashamed of it. 

Billy Collins’s Commencement Address at Colorado College is a graduation speech. His speech is inspiring, comedic, and light-hearted. His graduation speech’s comedic aspects make it memorable and are traditionally very inspiring, telling the audience that they have worked hard to get where you are, never give up, and keep on trying no matter how hard it gets. However, Colin flips this on its head in his speech “Another motto I hold dear is if at first you don’t succeed, hide all evidence that you ever tried.” (Colin 2). This shows how unusual and different his speech is. The humorous tone mixed with the contradictory nature of his speech makes it unforgettable. Audience Collin’s audience is a graduation class, specifically a graduation class at Colorado College. He knows his audience well and understands them as he states in the first paragraph, “I think you deserve to know that this will be a finite experience. It is well-known in the world of public speaking that there is no pleasure you can give an audience that compares to the pleasure they get when it is over, so you can look forward to experiencing that pleasure 13 minutes from now. All the pre-law students just looked at their watches.” the fact that the pre-law students looked at the watches to make sure that the speech would only last 13 minutes shows how well he understands his audience. The purpose of this speech is to inspire students not to worry too much about the future and to not worry about the expensive houses or fast cars to instead live in the present and go out and experience life. “Time is more valuable than money.” (Colin 4) “When your time is done, you will not be remembered for what clothes you wore or what kind of car you drove” (Colin 5). He wants the students not to worry about the material but to live life instead, make new experiences, meet new people and cherish who and what you have.

Donovan Livingston’s Spoken Word Commencement Address at Harvard genres is a graduation speech and spoken word poetry. The poem is about racial inequalities in our education system. Livingston purpose of inspiring teachers and professors to help students realize their full potential “Unfortunately, I’ve seen more dividing and conquering In this order of operations — a heinous miscalculation of reality. For some, the only difference between a classroom and a plantation is time.” (Livingston). Livingston stated that many students feel like the classroom is a plantation or a prison because they cannot reach the full potential. They feel they are only in the classroom to fill quotas of diversity “How many times must we be made to feel like quotas” (Livingston). His audience is not only the educators but also the kids who have been made to think that they cannot reach their full potential “So a child can see their potential from right where they stand.” (Livingston). The purpose of this poem is to motivate the educators not to put down the students but instead to raise them up and let them reach the Stars.

 In conclusion, all three authors have used genre, audience, and purpose to strengthen their writing. For example, if Anzaldua did not have a purpose for writing, her short story would have been aimless. She could have been jumping from topic to topic because she would not know why she is writing. If Colin did not know his audience so well, he would not tailor his message to his audience. Nevertheless, since he knew his audience, he could make jokes that they would understand and enjoy while teaching them a vital life lesson. If Livingston did not know the genre of his speech, he would not be able to call back to when he was in high school and was not allowed to have his graduation speech be a poem.

Works Cited

Anzaldúa, Gloria. How to Tame a Wild Tongue. Aunt Lute Books, 1987. Everett, https://www.everettsd.org/cms/lib07/WA01920133/Centricity/Domain/965/Anzaldua-Wild-Tongue.pdf. Accessed 30 September 2020.

Collins, Billy. “Commencement Speech Transcript.” Graduation Wisdom, 19 May 2008, https://www.graduationwisdom.com/speeches/0135-Billy-Collins-Gives-Brilliant-Witty-Commencement-Speech-Address-At-Colorado-College-2008.htm. Accessed 30 September 2020.

Livingston, Donovan. “Donovan Livingston’s Harvard Graduate School of Education Student Speech.” YouTube, Harvard Graduate School of Education, 25 May 2016, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9XGUpKITeJM&ab_channel=HarvardGraduateSchoolofEducation. Accessed 30 September 2020.

Final Major Assignment #3

Genre #1:  Infographic

Genre #2 : Tumblr blog

https://toxic-gaming18.tumblr.com/

Genre #3 : PSA

Rationale

My assignment aims to show the toxicity of the online gaming community and hopefully help people combat this. My first genre is an infographic; they are a great way to give short and concise information. Mine is about how online gaming affects kids. This is great for parents, teachers, and other concerned adults as they can read this at the doctor’s office or a waiting room, and they can pass it out to their friends or co-workers. The infographic explains how bullying in online gaming can lead to depression or suicide. It also informs you how to help your children. If your child is experiencing harassment, urge your child to continue to play if they want to and block or mute the toxic players. I tried to make the infographic clean, simple, and easy to read by writing down only the most crucial pieces of information. My graphics came from one of my sources. I fell in love with their dark blue and red color scheme. It felt dark, cold, and lonely, just like how many of the minorities felt in the gaming community.

My second genre was a blog. I chose a Tumblr blog because I wanted to reach the youth, preferably the zoomers (Gen Z). After all, zoomers are more vocal about social injustices and are more likely to be interested in the gaming community’s toxicity. However, I also wanted to reach the millennials because they make up a significant portion of gamers. Since Tumblr has both millennials and zoomers, I thought I would kill two birds with one stone. The Tumblr blog posts are mostly of other people who have had to deal with the harassment and are sick and tired of it, sharing their experiences and venting about it. The other posts are gamers informing other gamers on how to avoid and deal with the harassment. My purpose of reaching the younger group of people is to hopefully stop this toxicity cycle and give them advice on how they can deal with the harassment.

The third and last genre is a public service announcement. The purpose of this PSA is to highlight how prevalent harassment is in the gaming community. The message is to stand up for your fellow gamers when you see them being harassed. My audience for this announcement is fellow gamers who do not know the severity of the harassment or try to ignore it. I hope this public service announcement will be a kick in the butt for them, so instead of being a bystander, they will be an active ally.

Reflection

The infographic was the hardest to do. I initially thought it would be the easiest or one of the easiest, but surprisingly it was not. The infographic was the most difficult because most of my sources do not have data such as percentages and graphs for me to use, so it took a surprisingly long time to get my thoughts together to form a relatively short and concise infographic. Even though it is not the best infographic I have made, I am still happy with the result. My second genre, the Tumblr blog, was the easiest to do. All I did was find other posts and repost them and added a few of my own. Even though it was the easiest, it was still very informative, and even I learned new information. My last genre, the public service announcement, was enjoyable to do. I had much creative liberty. Although It consisted of very little writing. I chose a bright color and big, bold text to people’s attention, and I think it brought the point home.

In conclusion, this assignment was a roller coaster but a fun one. I got to stretch my wings at many different genres, especially ones I have never used before. This assignment was a little bit harder than the other ones simply because I am not very artistic. I feel as if I could attract my audience easier because I had so many different genres to work with.

Works Cited

Campbell, Colin. “Gaming’s Toxic Men, Explained.” Polygon, Polygon, 25 July 2018, www.polygon.com/2018/7/25/17593516/video-game-culture-toxic-men-explained.

“Public Service Announcement Poster.” ktufsd, https://www.ktufsd.org/cms/lib/NY19000262/Centricity/Domain/129/Government%20Documents/Portfolio%20Documents/Section%20II/PSA%20-%20Poster.pdf.

Smith, Noah. “Racism, Misogyny, Death Threats: Why Can’t the Booming Video-Game Industry Curb Toxicity?” The Washington Post, WP Company, 23 July 2020, www.washingtonpost.com/technology/2019/02/26/racism-misogyny-death-threats-why-cant-booming-video-game-industry-curb-toxicity/.

Tucker, Staci. GRIEFING: POLICING MASCULINITY IN ONLINE GAMES, 2011, p. 131. Google Scholar, https://scholarsbank.uoregon.edu/xmlui/bitstream/handle/1794/12140/Tucker_Staci_ms2011fa.pdf?sequence=1&isAllowed=y.

“Two-Thirds of U.S. Online Gamers Have Experienced Severe Harassment, New ADL Study Finds.” Anti-Defamation League, www.adl.org/news/press-releases/two-thirds-of-us-online-gamers-have-experienced-severe-harassment-new-adl-study.

Final Major Assignment #4

I chose to write in a essay format because my audience are teachers and other students, I felt they would be most combatable with.

Coming into English 101, I only knew how to write essays in MLA, Times New Roman. My teachers never taught me the building blocks that every good writer needs to know, which is the theory of writing. In my short assignment number one, when I was asked what good writing is. I did not mention genre, purpose, or audience; instead, I talked about Natalie Wynn’s take on opulence “I find opulence very interesting because she talks about how wealth and tastes are correlated” ( Despeignes) . But that’s not the only thing that makes her a good writer. She knew her audience, which all people in the LGBT community and lefties both of these groups of people love the arts. Instead of making a lecture, she did a video essay with colorful lighting, outfit changes, and different gorgeous locations.

With each assignment, I have realized how vital genre, purpose, and audience are. I first grasped how knowing how to use these three key terms can make you a successful writer. To paraphrase the first paragraph in major assignment one, writers must know their audience in order to pick the genre that will further their purpose the most. Meaning if the writer’s audience is kids, it will make no sense to write a 20-page research paper that would not further the writer’s purpose. With each writing assignment, I learned how important it is to choose the right genre for your audience; it can be detrimental if you don’t know your audience well enough. In major assignment two, I learned a lot about research papers and how choosing the right topic can make or break your paper. The research paper was great for gathering evidence and giving me an immense insight into harassment and the gaming community. I would often think to myself, I always knew it was bad, but I never knew it was this bad.

At this point, my theory of writing is that knowing your audience, your purpose, and which genre your audience will respond to the most is crucial. Up until major assignment three, we’ve been only talking about different genres. Still, we haven’t used that many other genres if only used essays and research papers. However, in major assignment three, we started branching into more visual genres. For example, we started using PSA’s, infographics, presentations, blogs, and many other visual genres. We’ve even started to use audio such as podcasts and videos. These wide branches of genres can bring in a ton of new audiences that can further your purpose. What contributed to my theory of writing the most is major assignment three, my purpose was to teach people about harassment in the gaming community. The audiences I was trying to reach are parents or legal guardians who are possibly worried about what their kids are doing and video games. I wanted to inform them about the harassment and let them know not to take away the child’s video game but instead teach the child how to avoid the toxicity. I chose an infographic to give them that information because those are usually in waiting rooms in doctor and School offices where parents are generally waiting. My second audience was kids who don’t know about the harassment. For this, I chose a Tumblr blog, filled with accounts of other teenagers who have been affected by the harassment and are giving advice to other gamers. For my last audience, other gamers fed up with the harassment, so I chose a PSA, which was a call to action for gamers not to ignore this harassment but to stand up for the gamers that are being harassed.

I will be able to bridge my knowledge in the theory of writing to other applications. Wikipedia defines Bridging as “when the teacher encourages transfer by helping students to find connections between learning and to abstract their existing knowledge to new concepts. ” This means I can bridge the knowledge of genre, purpose, and audience. I got out of class and use it in a professional setting such as a cover letter or emails.

Works Cited

Despeignes, Gia M. “Major Assignment #1 Draft #2.” Edublog, https://giadespeignes.edublogs.org/2020/10/06/major-assignment-1-draft-2/.

Despeignes, Gia M. “Major Assignment #2: Inquiry-based Research Essay Draft #2.” Edublog, https://giadespeignes.edublogs.org/2020/11/01/major-assignment-2-inquiry-based-research-essay-draft-2/.

Despeignes, Gia M. “Major Assignment #3: Composition in Three Genres Draft # 2.” Edublog, https://giadespeignes.edublogs.org/2020/11/29/major-assignment-3-composition-in-three-genres-draft-2/.

Despeignes, Gia M. “Short Assignment #1: What is Good Writing?” Edublog, https://giadespeignes.edublogs.org/2020/09/10/short-assignment-1-what-is-good-writing/.

“Transfer of learning.” wikipedia, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Transfer_of_learning.

Major Assignment #4: A Theory of Writing

I chose to write in a essay format because my audience are teachers and other students, I felt they would be most combatable with.

Coming into English 101, I only knew how to write essays in MLA, Times New Roman. My teachers never taught me the building blocks that every good writer needs to know, which is the theory of writing. In my short assignment number one, when I was asked what good writing is. I did not mention genre, purpose, or audience; instead, I talked about Natalie Wynn’s take on opulence “I find opulence very interesting because she talks about how wealth and tastes are correlated” (Gia Despeignes) . But that’s not the only thing that makes her a good writer. She knew her audience, which all people in the LGBT community and lefties both of these groups of people love the arts. Instead of making a lecture, she did a video essay with colorful lighting, outfit changes, and different gorgeous locations.

With each assignment, I have realized how vital genre, purpose, and audience are. I first grasped how knowing how to use these three key terms can make you a successful writer. To paraphrase the first paragraph in major assignment one, writers must know their audience in order to pick the genre that will further their purpose the most. Meaning if the writer’s audience is kids, it will make no sense to write a 20-page research paper that would not further the writer’s purpose. With each writing assignment, I learned how important it is to choose the right genre for your audience; it can be detrimental if you don’t know your audience well enough. In major assignment two, I learned a lot about research papers and how choosing the right topic can make or break your paper. The research paper was great for gathering evidence and giving me an immense insight into harassment and the gaming community. I would often think to myself, I always knew it was bad, but I never knew it was this bad.

At this point, my theory of writing is that knowing your audience, your purpose, and which genre your audience will respond to the most is crucial. Up until major assignment four, we’ve been only talking about different genres. Still, we haven’t used that many other genres if only used essays and research papers. However, in major assignment four, we started branching into more visual genres. For example, we started using PSA’s, infographics, presentations, blogs, and many other visual genres. We’ve even started to use audio such as podcasts and videos. These wide branches of genres can bring in a ton of new audiences that can further your purpose. What contributed to my theory of writing the most is major assignment three, my purpose was to teach people about harassment in the gaming community. The audiences I was trying to reach are parents or legal guardians who are possibly worried about what their kids are doing and video games. I wanted to inform them about the harassment and let them know not to take away the child’s video game but instead teach the child how to avoid the toxicity. I chose an infographic to give them that information because those are usually in waiting rooms in doctor and School offices where parents are generally waiting. My second audience was kids who don’t know about the harassment. For this, I chose a Tumblr blog, filled with accounts of other teenagers who have been affected by the harassment and are giving advice to other gamers. For my last audience, other gamers fed up with the harassment, so I chose a PSA, which was a call to action for gamers not to ignore this harassment but to stand up for the gamers that are being harassed.

I will be able to bridge my knowledge in the theory of writing to other applications. Wikipedia defines Bridging as ” when the teacher encourages transfer by helping students to find connections between learning and to abstract their existing knowledge to new concepts. ” This means I can bridge the knowledge of genre, purpose, and audience. I got out of class and use it in a professional setting such as a cover letter or emails.

Short Assignment #11: Reflection on Your “Composition in Three Genres”

Audience: My intended audience was people who are not aware of the harassment and The gaming community; those people are usually parents. My other audience was people who are knowledgeable and are fed up.

Process: The process was significantly different from a research essay; I had to think more about my audience and how I could reach out to them in the best way possible.

Genre:The first genre I chose was the infographic because I thought it would be an excellent fit for people who do not know about the harassment, and they give me community, usually parents. I chose a PSA and a blog to reach out to the younger groups of people who make up a large amount of The gaming community.

Purpose: My purpose is to inform as many people as possible about the harassment in the gaming community and provide a solution. It affected my genre because I had to pick the genre that matched my purpose the best.

Major Assignment #3: Composition in Three Genres Draft # 2

Genre #1:  Infographic

Genre #2 : Tumblr blog

https://toxic-gaming18.tumblr.com/

Genre #3 : PSA

Rationale

My assignment aims to show the toxicity of the online gaming community and hopefully help people combat this. My first genre is an infographic; they are a great way to give short and concise information. Mine is about how online gaming affects kids. This is great for parents, teachers, and other concerned adults as they can read this at the doctor’s office or a waiting room, and they can pass it out to their friends or co-workers. The infographic explains how bullying in online gaming can lead to depression or suicide. It also informs you how to help your children. If your child is experiencing harassment, urge your child to continue to play if they want to and block or mute the toxic players. I tried to make the infographic clean, simple, and easy to read by writing down only the most crucial pieces of information. My graphics came from one of my sources. I fell in love with their dark blue and red color scheme. It felt dark, cold, and lonely, just like how many of the minorities felt in the gaming community.

My second genre was a blog. I chose a Tumblr blog because I wanted to reach the youth, preferably the zoomers (Gen Z). After all, zoomers are more vocal about social injustices and are more likely to be interested in the gaming community’s toxicity. However, I also wanted to reach the millennials because they make up a significant portion of gamers. Since Tumblr has both millennials and zoomers, I thought I would kill two birds with one stone. The Tumblr blog posts are mostly of other people who have had to deal with the harassment and are sick and tired of it, sharing their experiences and venting about it. The other posts are gamers informing other gamers on how to avoid and deal with the harassment. My purpose of reaching the younger group of people is to hopefully stop this cycle of toxicity and give them advice on how they can deal with the harassment.

The third and last genre is a public service announcement. The purpose of this PSA is to highlight how prevalent harassment is in the gaming community. The message is to stand up for your fellow gamers when you see them being harassed. My audience for this announcement is fellow gamers who do not know the severity of the harassment or try to ignore it. I hope this public service announcement will be a kick in the butt for them, so instead of being a bystander, they’ll be an active ally.

Reflection

The infographic was the hardest to do. I initially thought it would be the easiest or one of the easiest, but surprisingly it was not. The infographic was the most difficult because most of my sources do not have data such as percentages and graphs for me to use, so it took a surprisingly long time for me to get my thoughts together to form a relatively short and concise infographic. Even though it’s not the best infographic I’ve made, I am still happy with the end result. My second genre, the Tumblr blog, was the easiest to do. All I did was find other posts and repost them, and added a few of my own. Even though it was the easiest, it was still very informative, and even I learned new information. My last genre, the public service announcement, was very fun to do. I had a lot of creative liberty. Although It consisted of very little writing, I think it brought the point home.

In conclusion, this assignment was a roller coaster but a fun one. I got to stretch my wings at many different genres, especially ones I’ve never used before. This assignment was a little bit harder than the other ones simply because I’m not very artistic. I feel as if I was able to attract my audience easier because I had so many different genres to work with.

Post Write

Did this assignment remind you of any writing that you’ve done previously?  Please describe that work.

This assignment reminded me of major assignment number two which was about picking a research question and researching it.

What was new about this assignment?  Please be precise.

This assignment had us tackle different genres first hand.

What kinds of knowledge/writing skills did you draw on to produce this draft?  Please begin to use some of the key terms that have begun to form the basis of your theory of writing.  For example,  did you draw upon your understanding of audience awareness or genre?  How so?

I used my knowledge of purpose to decide which genre would attract my target audience

When drafting and revising, what choices did you make? Please explain.

I had to change my genre to best match my target audience.

What questions do you have for readers about the piece?

Which genre do you feel spoke to you the most and why?

Works Cited

“Public Service Announcement Poster.” ktufsd, https://www.ktufsd.org/cms/lib/NY19000262/Centricity/Domain/129/Government%20Documents/Portfolio%20Documents/Section%20II/PSA%20-%20Poster.pdf.

“Two-Thirds of U.S. Online Gamers Have Experienced Severe Harassment, New ADL Study Finds.” Anti-Defamation League, www.adl.org/news/press-releases/two-thirds-of-us-online-gamers-have-experienced-severe-harassment-new-adl-study.

Smith, Noah. “Racism, Misogyny, Death Threats: Why Can’t the Booming Video-Game Industry Curb Toxicity?” The Washington Post, WP Company, 23 July 2020, www.washingtonpost.com/technology/2019/02/26/racism-misogyny-death-threats-why-cant-booming-video-game-industry-curb-toxicity/.

Campbell, Colin. “Gaming’s Toxic Men, Explained.” Polygon, Polygon, 25 July 2018, www.polygon.com/2018/7/25/17593516/video-game-culture-toxic-men-explained.

Tucker, Staci. GRIEFING: POLICING MASCULINITY IN ONLINE GAMES, 2011, p. 131. Google Scholar, https://scholarsbank.uoregon.edu/xmlui/bitstream/handle/1794/12140/Tucker_Staci_ms2011fa.pdf?sequence=1&isAllowed=y.

Major Assignment #3: Composition in Three Genres Draft # 1

Genre #1:  Infographic

Genre #2 : Tumblr blog

https://toxic-gaming18.tumblr.com/

Genre #3 : PSA

Rationale

The purpose of my assignment is to show the toxicity of the online gaming community and to hopefully help people combat this. My first genre is infographics. Infographics of a great way to give short and concise information. My infographic is about how online gaming affects kids. I think that this is great for parents, teachers, and other concerned adults as they can read this at the doctor’s office or waiting room and they can pass it out to their coworkers or friends. The infographic explains how bullying in online gaming can lead to depression or suicide but it also talks about how you can help your children, for example, if your child is experiencing harassment urge your child to continue to play if they want to and block or mute the toxic players. I try to make the infographic clean, simple, and easy to read by writing down only the most important information. My graphics came from one of my sources. I fell in love with their dark blue and red color scheme. It felt dark, cold, and lonely just like how many of the minorities felt in the gaming community.

For my blog I chose a Tumblr blog because I wanted to reach the youth, preferably the zoomers (Gen Z) because zoomers are more vocal about social injustice and are more likely to be interested in the toxicity of The gaming community. However, I also wanted to reach the millennials because they make up a significant portion of gamers. Since Tumblr has both millennials and zoomers I thought I would kill two birds with one stone. The posts on the Tumblr blog are mostly of other people who have had to deal with the toxic gamers and who are sick and tired of it showing their experiences and venting about it. And the other posts are gamers informing other gamers how to avoid and deal with the toxicity in gaming. My purpose of trying to reach the younger group of people is to hopefully stop this cycle of toxicity and to give them advice on how they can deal with the harassment.

My third and last genre was a public service announcement. The purpose of this public service announcement was to highlight how prevalent the harassment is in the gaming community. The message is to stand up for your fellow gamers when you see them being harassed. My audience for this announcement is fellow gamers who do not know the severity of the harassment or try to ignore it and I hope this public service announcement will be a kick in the butt for them instead of being a bystander to be an active ally.

Reflection

The infographic was the hardest to do. I originally thought that it was going to be the easiest or one of the easiest but surprisingly it was not. The reason why the infographic was the most difficult is that most of my sources do not have data such as percentages and graphs for me to use so it took a surprisingly long time for me to get my thoughts together in order to form a relatively short and concise infographic. Even though it’s not the best infographic I’ve made I am still happy with the end result. My second genre, the Tumblr blog, was the easiest to do. All I did was find other posts and repost them. Even though it was the easiest it was still very informative and even I learned new information. My last genre, the public service announcement was very fun to do I had a lot of creative liberty. It consisted of very little writing but I think it brought the point home. In conclusion, this assignment was a roller coaster but a fun one. I got to stretch my wings at many different genres, especially ones that I’ve never used before. This assignment was a little bit harder than the other ones simply because I’m not very artistic. I do feel as if I was able to draw in my audience easier because I had so many different genres to work with.

Post Write

Did this assignment remind you of any writing that you’ve done previously?  Please describe that work.

This assignment reminded me of major assignment number two which was about picking a research question and researching it.

What was new about this assignment?  Please be precise.

This assignment had us tackle different genres first hand.

What kinds of knowledge/writing skills did you draw on to produce this draft?  Please begin to use some of the key terms that have begun to form the basis of your theory of writing.  For example,  did you draw upon your understanding of audience awareness or genre?  How so?

I used my knowledge of purpose to decide which genre would attract my target audience

When drafting and revising, what choices did you make? Please explain.

I had to change my genre to best match my target audience.

What questions do you have for readers about the piece?

Which genre do you feel spoke to you the most and why?

Works Cited

https://www.ktufsd.org/cms/lib/NY19000262/Centricity/Domain/129/Government%20Documents/Portfolio%20Documents/Section%20II/PSA%20-%20Poster.pdf

https://www.adl.org/news/press-releases/two-thirds-of-us-online-gamers-have-experienced-severe-harassment-new-adl-study

https://www.washingtonpost.com/technology/2019/02/26/racism-misogyny-death-threats-why-cant-booming-video-game-industry-curb-toxicity/

https://www.polygon.com/2018/7/25/17593516/video-game-culture-toxic-men-explained

https://scholarsbank.uoregon.edu/xmlui/bitstream/handle/1794/12140/Tucker_Staci_ms2011fa.pdf?sequence=1&isAllowed=y

Short Assignment #10: Research Sources Report

The first source that I’ll be using is my Washington Post (https://www.washingtonpost.com/technology/2019/02/26/racism-misogyny-death-threats-why-cant-booming-video-game-industry-curb-toxicity/) source. I think it would be great and my infographic since it talks about the mental health effects that the  harassment on online video games have on young people. I’ll also use “GRIEFING: POLICING MASCULINITY IN ONLINE GAMES” (https://scholarsbank.uoregon.edu/xmlui/bitstream/handle/1794/12140/Tucker_Staci_ms2011fa.pdf?sequence=1&isAllowed=y.) for my infographic because it provides a great definition of griefing it also provides a short and concise explanation of why some gamers grief. My third source is from Polygon (https://www.polygon.com/2018/7/25/17593516/video-game-culture-toxic-men-explained) and will also be for my infographic and will explain what people in The gaming community have done to try to spread awareness of the harassment and to stop the harassment. 

My two additional sources are from the ADL (https://www.adl.org/news/press-releases/two-thirds-of-us-online-gamers-have-experienced-severe-harassment-new-adl-study) and a guide on how to make a public service announcement poster (https://www.ktufsd.org/cms/lib/NY19000262/Centricity/Domain/129/Government%20Documents/Portfolio%20Documents/Section%20II/PSA%20-%20Poster.pdf). I chose the specific guide because it was very informative and easy to read, It did not waste it’s time on unnecessary details. I do realize the guide is made for students however I think that’s what makes it as helpful as it is. My second additional source is the ADL because the PSA guide recommended identifying a hook to grab the viewer’s attention and I thought that the fact that two-thirds  of online gamers have experienced severe harassment was very eye-catching.

Short Assignment #9: Audience Strategy

Our textbook describes profiles as painting a “picture of some piece of a person’s life, leading to an interpretation of what is interesting or important about that person and that person’s world” George Clooney profile matches the textbook requirements because the writer wrote about real moments that happened to Clooney however it paints him in a certain light. Which is that he is manly, lovable and charming. All of the stories in the profile paint him in this light. I would describe Esquire readers as men who like fashion, politics and food Esquire brings him more of a professional crowd. The writer of George clooney’s profile met the readers need one quote I feel as if perfectly shows how well this panders to Esquires audience “On the walls of Clooney’s home, there are a lot of photographs from powerful people, such as President Obama, who have written him in friendship and in gratitude. There is also a framed selection of neckties that once belonged to one powerful person in particular, John F. Kennedy.” as you can see this quote mentions both fashion and politics and how George Clooney looks up to these powerful men.

I think my target audience two major assignments #3 all gamers who are also fed up with the toxicity and the community. I will be meeting the expectation of my audience by giving them suggestions as to how they can mitigate this toxicity and also why this toxicity is happening in the first place.

Short Assignment #8: Potential Genres Proposal (for Major Assignment #3)

The characteristic of obituaries as a genre is that they include quotes from families and friends stories of important achievements in their lives. I believe the New York times obituary has all of those characteristics for example they have quotes from family and friends ““May Allah be with you always,” Jermaine Jackson concluded”. They also wrote about his greatest achievements “Music stardom on an unprecedented level, however, was. Mr. Jackson’s first solo album for Epic, “Off the Wall,” released in 1979, yielded two No. 1 singles and sold seven million copies, but it was a mere prologue to what came next. His follow-up, “Thriller,” released in 1982, became the best-selling album of all time and helped usher in the music video age.”. I believe that there is a bias towards Michael Jackson to try to paint him in a better light however since the writer is a journalists they could not help but to talk about his Fall from Grace. I believe that the obituaries audience are fans of Michael Jackson because the first line of the obituary describes how the fans of Michael Jackson think about him “For his legions of fans, he was the Peter Pan of pop music: the little boy who refused to grow up.” 

For my genre I want a brochure, photo essay and a public service announcement.By research question I’m not sure if you mean the research question I did in the last major assignment. But if so then my research question is “why is the gaming community toxic towards certain groups of people?” I picked brochure because I’ve done those before and I’m well versed in what to put in them and it would match one of my audiences who are people who don’t know much about the video game community, that demographic is usually made of older people and I feel as if older people like brochures. For the second genre I picked the photo essay because I love taking pictures and I figured that this would be fun. From my last genre I picked public service announcement because it sounded like it would be an entertaining genre to write. Also because it matches my other audience which is people who know about the toxicity in The gaming community and want to put a stop to it.